Thanks, but meh, the meaning is more or less intact.
Reads a bit like she's just skimming through games to check out the writing, which is cool as a writer, checking out your competition, but everyone else doesn't care about "the writing" as such. We care about the story, characters, atmosphere, and writing, although it's a huge part of that, is still only a part of it. Combat and exploration is a part of it as well.
She's kind of like a musician watching movies with his eyes closed so he can focus on the music. Which is cool, if you're specifically interested in music, but most of those who want to watch a movie are there for the movie as a whole (or for a dimly lit, ridiculously choreographed, pg-13 sex-scene, lol, but Mass Effect already got that covered..).
But let's assume that's not her, talking as a writer, but her, talking as a gamer who doesn't like certain traditional aspects of gaming.
What she doesn't seem to get is that there's a fundamental difference between games, interactive novels and movies, and focusing on story telling in a game doesn't have to mean stripping it from its game-elements and turning it into a movie with insane hardware requirements.
I mean, we need more people like her (not specifically like her, but you know: ), people who aren't stuck in the same gaming rut, people who can still look at gaming and can think about innovations and can design a game without only thinking inside the box of Modern Warfare for a FPS or Warcraft 2 for a RTS.
I still don't think her approach is the way to go. Maybe it'll help to get a couple of moms who hate gaming for what it is to play the game regardless (what a goal, lol), but how about thinking up ways to make the boring grind for EXP and in-game currency and the combat more meaningful, personal and cinematic, rather than just offering the option to skip it?
I mean, for the too-busy-to-game-but-still-gaming-because-they-have-to-for-their-job-in-the-gaming-industry-mom demographic it may be a serviceable quick fix for now, lol, but in the long run a little more innovation is needed.