allright, this next thing i just got in my head somehow while in the bus back from school, its inspired by gently ( iowa version ) by Slipknot , Danger, stay away by Slipknot for its desolate feeling, and the movie Dances with Wolves

note though, its not finished or finetuned at all, its just what i got up to now
Desolate cries
the desolate cries of the lone wolf, the moon his only friend
thats what i am, hunting alone without the pack
will i survive?
the lone black wolf, i call him my brother
i see the desolate empty plains in his eyes, and i feel for him
cry to the moon my brother, and i will cry along
man and wolf will be one, and we wont be alone anymore
forever dancing with the wolves
forever alone, your cries make me cold to the bone
come stand on this rock with me my friend, and cry your heart out
there is more to come to this ofcourse, its not done yet, but ive got to wait for inspiration to come back to me

any thoughts?