Gameplay & Commentary? (opinions)

[Gee]

My friend's starting to make YouTube videos, and I did a dual commentary with him whilst playing Killing Floor.

Just wanted some opinions/constructive criticism either here, or in the video comments?

Killing Floor | Biotics Lab - Hard | Dual commentary - YouTube

I'm the significantly louder one lol.
EDIT: Also it's him playing in the video, not me.

 

[Gee]

As of now, you sound like two guys who just met over the internet. Bring out your best friendship qualities and create a unique on-screen dynamic.

Thank you for that very in-depth reply!
We will take the tips into account.

Weirdly, we didn't meet over the internet, we've known each other for about 12/13 years lol.

We didn't really give much though at all about the content of the commentary, we pretty much just said "shall we do one?", and went on for a game whilst recording.

 

[EpharGy]

I agree with Alphaboy, i much prefer highlights clips of fun/interesting parts rather than entire gameplay.