Awesome work, the second model looks really promising and of really good standard
I'm only nit picking now because this is really good standard work, I see this as having a great amount of potential for actual inclusion in the game
This is probably asking a huge amount, but 1 thing in common with most of the KF chars is you can't really see their face. If you could add a cap (rather low down) or something that would obscure her face partially, it would look more KFy... if thats a word
Perhaps something like this (only darker of course to mat6ch the regular KF blue):
I think a few things that would really bring this model right up to par is a little more subtlety: -
- As Gartley said remove the bust, although I would probably leave the bump, but remove the crook hugging her midsection.
- Change the trousers to be a the same shade of blue as the rest of the outfit. This is a uniform after all
- Add more grime (like you can see on her sleeves), especially to her jeans as they are far too clean.
I think those 3 additions, and adding that cap to make her look a little more professional would make it clear she is a female character (the hair, face and smaller frame already do that really), without making her stand out too far from the rest of the cast.
(If we want to really nit pick, making her arms slightly thinner would make her look better proportioned too, although I imagine this is actually quite a bit of work
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Thats the key, making her fit with the rest of the group puts her as a contender for proper addition to KF