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3D & Animation Penguin Animation (maya). Feedback required

Ska Wars

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This is a rough draft of a uni project which was

"funny story in 15 seconds".

Basically I'm after feedback. Keep it to the point and try and describe what you mean as best as possible. This is due in Wednesday so all comments before Tuesday please ;)

I know it's not very funny, but then again I only had 15 seconds so give me a break :p I don't get marked for sound effects so they probably won't be added. This is my first time 3D animating so bare with me :p


Penguin animation

As I say, rough draft and I've already seen a few things I wanna change (don't like some of the camera zooms and the actions are too fast towards the end, better fish picture needed to).

Cheers.