Very nice, have/are you doing something in learning arts or something? You're really good.
Yeah I agree. he really looks the part. The others seem to be like silly edits (no offence) but I do like how the FP looks like the big or king of the hill. The last picture needed the same effect on all of the clots of atleast distance them apart to show why the front ones stand out.That Bunny Scrake picture, is really creepy
Personally the background doesn't suit the Gorefast there as he is mindless and only thinks about chopping stuff up really. The background makes it seem like he has a lot of thoughts going through as they look like the brain (forgot the name) electrical things working.
Remember this is only my opinion but I will give it a 4/10 this time. The only thing that I personally liked was how you did the Gorefast stances.